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To try and fly with broken wings,

Appears as plain stupidity,

But how are we to seek new heights,

Tied down by errors of our plights?

If blind ambition remains intact,

Must hope be scarpered by that simple fact?

And if our wings may be repaired,

Would we fly or be too scared?


The question falls on young minds shoulders,

As we look for guidance from our elders,

Which path, if taken, will lead us to fall?

And which one will leave us standing tall?

Oppressed, we gazed as choices surround us,

Eventually, indecision will drown us,

And yet we stand with broken wing,

And with loud voices begin to sing,


The youth is not wasted on those who try,

And with broken wings take the chance to fly.
©2008-2009 ~fantasybabe
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Author's Comments

I felt in rather an inspired mood today, and I hope this verse captures the essence of that feeling.

To all those who find themselves relating to the Voice ... take note of the last section ... that is its message to you ... FLY!!!!!!

Don't EVER let ANYONE/ANYTHING hold you down!

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:iconrhyshoo:
that was lovely :) I shall always fly and with you by my side :)

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:iconjack-the-panda:
Fly, my pretties, fly! :evillaugh:

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:iconjack-the-panda:
But seriously, lovely my dear and very poignant. :D

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:iconfantasybabe:
thank you - your praise is most appreicated :D

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"The youth is not wasted on those who try, and with broken wings take the chance to fly"

'Fly' by Fantasybabe
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:iconjack-the-panda:
Why so formal? Have you suddenly gone all artistique?? :giggle:

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:iconfantasybabe:
Na course not lol ... I was just in an elliquant mood lol : )

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"The youth is not wasted on those who try, and with broken wings take the chance to fly"

'Fly' by Fantasybabe
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:iconjack-the-panda:
:giggle: How are you btw? Haven't spoken to you in ages...

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